Smoking in Public Speaking
Sylogism· Major Premise : Everything, which has dangerous effect should be limited
· Minor Premise : Smoking in Public Speaking has the dangerous effect
· Conclusion : Smoking in Public Speaking should be limited
Out Line
1. Introduction
· Topic Sentence : Most of People do not want to do dangerous activities
· Problem / Issue : Smoking in public speaking is a kind of dangerous activities can cause a lot of dangerous disease
· Thesis Statement : Because Smoking in public speaking is a kind of dangerous activities, it should not be limited
2. Reasoning
· Rewording : Smoking in public speaking is a kind of dangerous activities that should be limited
· Reason :
1. Every people do not want to have a bad lifestyle
Supporting reason:
· The cigarette is not good for our life.
· It caused our body weak.
· The smoker will addict with the cigarette.
· The smokers think that cigarette is everything for their life
2. The contents of cigarette is dangerous for our body
Supporting reason:
· One of the main dangers of smoking is due to Nicotine
· The nicotine can cause a lot of disease.
· The basic content of cigarette can cause a changing of our body.
· A Changing of our body will Cause our body easy to get a lot of diseases.
· The Cigarette has addictive which caused addicted.
· Both physically and psychologically addictive, and it causes those who use it to want to smoke one cigarette after another
3. The effects of cigarette is not good
Supporting reason:
· There are many dangers of smoking to the body, to the immediate family, to the society, to the environment and to the economy
· As we know gather that by using it Cause some diseases as cancer, lung, Bronchitis, Heart, Emphysema, death and others.
· Smoking a cigarette also causes getting a lot of disease.
· The smokers will be weak in all aspects.
· The Smokers will get difficulty to thinking and it can cause bad further –achievement in the future.
· Smoking also has emotional costs.
· The dependence to smoking when one gets addicted can be very restricting.
· There is also the pressure to quit smoking as the smoker realizes the harmful effects to himself and to his or her family.
· Smoking also leads to breakups with their loved ones.
· Smoke makes clothes dirty and the resulting in increase in money spent on dry cleaning.
· The smoke can also result in bad smell in the skin and hair
3. Refutation
Opponent Argument : Smoking can increase our spirit.
Reason of Opponent :
· Smoking a cigarette can give many good effects in the activity of smokers.
Supporting reasons:
· There are many activities which needs good thinking to get a good result.
· The smoker will work hard.
· They will avoid from disease by smoking use a pipe.
· The smoker will do everything well.
· The smokers will have a good confidence.
· The smoker quickly feels more alert and relaxed.
· There are many activities which need good concentration.
Supporting reasons:
· The smoker will enjoy when they are working by smoking a cigarette
· If the smokers concentrate, they will get a good result of their works.
· Smoking in the activities of smoker can lose dizzy
· Smoking can solve a problem which has.
· The smokers will get easy to work hard.
Supporting reasons:
· The smoker will be easy to think.
· The smokers will get motivation to work fast and well.
· The smokers will have a good spirit to work.
Refutation : It shows us that smoking in the public speaking should be limited and we should gather to avoid this activity.
Reason of refutation:
· . Causing the bad effect for our life
Supporting reasons:
· There are many bad effects which caused by the content of cigarette as explained above.
· It is possible to the smokers to steal everything to buy the cigarette for their needs if they do not have money to buy a pack of cigarette.
· The basic contents of cigarette can broke the environment.
· The smoker will have yellow teeth, it means extra charge from the dentist aside from the usual cleaning
· Smokers were also found to have darkened gums.
· Smoking could also effect the wrinkling of the skin earlier than the usual.
· The tar from tobacco smoke starts to accumulate on the bronchial tubes leading to the lungs.
· The hot smoke burns the tiny hair like projections (called cilia) that trap harmful particles before they enter the lungs
· It can cause bad effects for the environment
Supporting reasons:
· As we know that by smoking a cigarette in the general place can cause some disease and also death as explained above
· The smoke will cause a population of the air.
· The environment will be hot and not safety in health.
· It less social security benefits
· Being a smoker will Cause many trouble things
Supporting reasons:
· The users will smoke more cigarettes.
· The users will be isolated by some of their friends who are not a smokers
· It is possible to the smokers give the cigarette to others people as their family, friends and others.
· The drug passes quickly into the bloodstream, reaching the brain within about 10 seconds
· In another 5 to 10 seconds the nicotine has spread to all parts of the body.
4. Conceding Valid Point of the Opponent
Opponent’s valid Point : Smoking in the public speaking should be limited in the future
a. The environment will be kept from the population of air.
b. The people will do the activities without smoking.
c. The people will have a good life without being a smoker.
Conceding : Most of people want to lose out by giving limitation to the smokers smoke in the public speaking.
1. Most of people knew that Cigarette is dangerous for their healthy
a. Smoking gives a higher risk of starting a fire.
b. A cigarette reaches a temperature of nearly 2,000 degrees Fahrenheit. This high heat helps release thousands of chemical compounds, including poisons like carbon monoxide and hydrogen cyanide, at least 43 carcinogens, and numerous mutagens.
c. They do not want to break their healthy in the future.
d. They want to have a good life with a good air without a population of air.
2. The contents of it is dangerous for our life in the future
a. The smokers will be easy to get a disease.
b. One of the main dangers of smoking is due to Nicotine
c. The nicotine raises both the heart rate and blood pressure and will broke them.
3. Smoking in the public speaking will cause bad effects.
a. The passive smokers will get a more trouble with their healthy.
b. The active smoker also will get a lot of disease as lung, cancer and possible to death.
c. The environment will get a population of air.
d. The smoker has to exert more physical effort to attain a given task than does a nonsmoker.
e. The heart in particular must work harder, particularly during rigorous exercise.
f. Increased levels of carbon monoxide in the blood can impair vision, perception of time, and coordination.
g. Smoking cause number of smoke related diseases such as lung cancer
h. It could also result in a decreased capability to enjoy physical capabilities because of the ailment or side effects like breathing problems
i. Smoking leads to reduction in life expectancy.
j. A smoker suffers increased resistance to the flow of air into the lungs and reduced lung capacity.
k. Beside that, prolonged tobacco use leads to stained teeth and fingers and bad breath
l. Over the years a smoker will be more likely to develop respiratory ailments, thickening of the arteries, blood clots, cancer of the lung, cervix, larynx, mouth, esophagus, bladder, pancreas, and kidney, and emphysema, as well as exhibit symptoms such as reduced stamina, poor athletic performance, wheezing, coughing, dizziness, and nausea
5. Conclusion
Rewording the TS: Smoking in public speaking is a kind of dangerous activities, it should not be limited
Demand of action: Government should not permit the smokers smoke in the public speaking and make the special place to smoke.
Alternative Solution:
· We should avoid and say no to others that it is dangerous.
· Say no to all kind of dangerous thing as smoking in the public speaking.
· We must remember that smoking in the public speaking can cause many bad effects as explained above.
· We should avoid smoking in the public speaking
· We should not smoke in the public speaking and we will have a good life in the future.
· Government should make the special place to smoke for the smokers to avoid spreading a lot of disease.
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