Cerpen: Change The life With Love

PROFILE OF THE STORY

Theme : Love and Greedy

Setting : royal garden, kingdom, waterfall, and forest

Character : Sovia and Luther Junior (James luther’s Parents), King Albert Funderson, Queen Maya, General George, The poor man “James luther“, King Paul, Queen Elisha, Jean Funderson (the princess)

Characterization and Characters’ trait :

·        Sovia ; kind, motherhood, and humble (protagonist)

·        Luther Junior : Strong, Brave (protagonist)

·        James luther ; Smart, strong, brave, funny (protagonist)

·        Sam : loyal (protagonist)

·        King Albert Funderson (King of Mahasurya Kingdom); stubborn, egoist, emotional, dictator (antagonist)

·        Queen Maya (Queen of Mahasurya Kingdom) : Kind, wish, loving (protagonist)

·        King Paul (King of Mahameru Kingdom) : kind, loving and wise (protagonist)

·        Queen Elisha (Queen of Mahameru Kingdom): motherhood, kind and humble (protagonist)

·        Jean Funderson (the princess) : Calm, Humble (Protagonist)

·        George (the commander of Mahasurya Kingdom) ; strong, smart and pengkhianat (antagonist)

·        Nehru (the commander of Mahameru Kingdom): strong, brave, Smart and loyal (protagonist)

STORY: CHANGE THE LIFE WITH LOVE

The Meaning of True Love

In the middle of jungle Suryo, peaceful, Calm, and with beautiful waterfall and there are not other people except Sovia and Luther Junior and their servant; Sam. Sovia and Luther Junior are the couple who did not get the permission from Luther Junior’s parents to get married, because Luther Junior is from riches family and Sovia is a poor woman. They got married in other place and lived in the middle of Suryo Jungle.

Day by day, month by month and year by years past, Luther Junior and Sovia have a young child; James luther, the Handsome and smart son.

In abstracting. . .

In meeting room, there are Sovia and Luther Junior, King Albert Funderson, Queen Maya, Sam and their others servants and generals.

“Go away!! I said that I don’t want you marry with her” King Albert Funderson Said angrily

“Dad, he is our son” Queen Maya hoped and cries

“Shut up!!” King Albert Funderson replied

“General, chase they away” King Albert Funderson asked George; the general of the Mahasurya kingdom.

King Albert Funderson drove away his son and Sovia. Queen Maya cried and asked Sam to accompany his wife. There was a silence; everyone in court could not say anythings to see Albert Funderson's family tragedy. No one dared to resist the dictatorship of King Alferd.

“Hei hunny, what are you thinking about?” Sovia dissolve Luther Junior’s daydreams who still remember the incident 20 years ago, when he asked for blessing to his parents after getting married with Sovia; the poor woman from small village; Kusmoyo Village.

“no, my wife” Luther Junior replays

“Are you still thinking of your family?” Sovia Said

“Hei Hunny, where is James luther?” Luther Junior's change the subject

“He may be in Waterfall with his “Friends” Sovia says

“owhhh . . .” Luther Junior Says flatly

Luther Junior always remembers his family at Mahasurya kingdom; especially his beloved mother; Queen Maya. The last news from Sam (the servant who asked by Queen Maya to keep Luther Junior and Sovia during they live in the jungle) that his mother is getting sick; no traditional healers can treat her.

“I really miss you mom”. Luther Junior says slowly

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The Meaning of Friendship

Splashing waterfalls, small rivers flow in the area of the waterfall

the cool water, gentle breeze, the atmosphere of an unspoiled forest green

“hei wulfi! Catch it” James luther says

“aik aik aik” Wulfi caught and gave the ball to James luther

“agrrrrrggggggghhhhhhh” voiced of roumand; the king lion.

“uukkkkwwwwwwww” followed by Gufi voiced; the big and strong elephant.

James luther always comes to that waterfall to visit his friends; his friends are the animals as Wulfi; the smart monkey, Willy; the snack, Gufi; the elephant, Roumand; the Lion, Tee wee; the Crocodile and still many animals that become his friends. James luther has ability in fighting and other abilities that aren’t had by other as climbing the mountain quickly, fast runner, and speed swimmer. Because of it, Luther Junior forbad him to go from the jungle because he did not want if his son will be known by others people.

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The Changes start

In one day, without the knowing of his father and mother, James luther go out of the forest and into the kingdom's territory Mahameru, led by King Paul. In the middle of the traditional market; solder Announced about the condition of the Mahameru kingdom. All residents gathered near.

"hai people of the country of Mahameru…" solder started, the traditional market atmosphere became calm.

“King Paul gives an opportunity for youths to join the royal Mahameru be a soldier and was appointed superior general of the army of Mahameru”. The solder continues read the announcement . . .

In recent years, the kingdom of Mahameru was attacked by the royal Mahasurya who want to take Mahameru to be occupided, the King of Mahameru is very old and no longer able to lead the empire and war. The King only has one daughter, Jean Funderson. Therefore, the kingdom took the initiative to find a gallant generals to help War Commander of Mahameru; Nehru, in the fight against the invasion the kingdom Mahasurya.

James Luther said to himself “I will follow that selection, I will change the fate of my parents in the forest!”

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Two days have passed; the atmosphere of Suryo forest is very different

“Sam . . . Sam . . . Sam“. Lord Luther Junior calls his servant

“Yes Sir!! I am here” Sam ran toward the front of the house to meet with Luther Junior

“What’s up Sir?” Sam said to Lord Luther Junior

“Do you know where James luther is?” asked Lord Luther Junior

“ohh, I do not know about him, Sir”

“huft, where is he?!” Lord Luther Junior worry

“Cool it hunny, he may go with his friends around the jungle”. Sovia tried to make the situation looks enjoy and calm.

“I hope so” Luther Junior worry

Day after day, month after month, James does not come back; no one knows about his condition, his family gave up his departure

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The Struggle of life

After going through some very rigorous selection process, and issued a large enough energy, James luther was finally selected as the general war of Mahameru. He kept practicing and practicing war with hundreds of combat troops for several months.

When finished practicing, James went to the beautiful park of Mahameru kingdom, he sees such a beautiful garden atmosphere, he remembers the same atmosphere of Waterfalls in jungle suryo. James luther unintentionally reflect and Princess Jean Funderson Mahameru approaches the dashing and daring general, and. . .

“Sorry Princess, actually I . . .!” not finished he explained, Jean Funderson interrupted james

“Never mind, Actually, I want to find a friend to talk” Jean Funderson Said

Jean Funderson asked James to remember triumph of Mahameru before the attack by the kingdom of Mahasurya last few years. Second after second, minutes changed by hour, the do not realize that the night has passed. . .

“It was already getting late, it would be nice if the princess returned to the kingdom for the rest” Suddenly, James Luther breaking the stories of Jean Funderson

“ohww . . . yea, I think so” Jean Funderson said

James Luther leaves the park of Mahameru Kingdom that is very beautiful, a place where Jean Funderson spent time with King Paul, Queen Elisha, and his older brother, John, killed by troops of Mahasurya Kingdom.

“James . . .” Putri Jean Funderson calls and James luther stops his walk.

“Yes princess, what can I do for you?” Jenderal James luther says

“I hope you can beat Mahasurya. . .” Jean Funderson hopes

“. . . and can recapture the glory and the prosperity of the kingdom Mahameru” she continues

“Yes Putri! Trush me, I will seize the power and the glory of Mahameru” James asked

Jean's face seemed calm, she was more salute to James luther, she smiles.

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In the area of Mahameru kingdom, the atmosphere is filled with new powers, including the generals who led the James luther naval forces, and Commander of the Nehru in ground troops. According to the advice of General James luther that to maximize attack Mahasurya kingdom, there must be two way to attack it, land and sea attacks and must be run at night. And the idea was immediately received a positive response from warlords Mahameru; Commander Nehru.

“Mahameru army, It is time to attack the wrong way” Nehru commander said firmly and loudly in hundreds of troops Mahameru war.

In addition to assault by land and sea, the Kingdom Mahameru should not be empty, there must be strict vigil inside and outside the kingdom. Therefore, General James advised to ask a few troops at the Kingdom during the Commander General James luther and Nehru attacked the kingdom of Mahasurya

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Inside the Kingdom Mahameru. . .

“surely we will lose again . . . uhuk uhuk uhuk” King Paul said on the bed with his sickness

“do not be discouraged, I am sure we will win!” Queen Elisha answered

"We must win! General James luther can do it! "Said Princess Jean Funderson.

"Are you so sure? And looks very happy? "Teased the Queen Elisha

Jean Funderson just smiled and dreaming in a moment can continue Mahameru royal power with James as her husband. And suddenly interrupted her reverie

“Do you like him, Jean Funderson?” King Paul asked

“haa . . . hmmm . . . eee , , ” Jean Funderson shocked and could not answer the question

“I agree if you marry him, it’s fine for us” Queen Elisha continues

“mom, what are you talking about? Please don’t teas me” Jean blushed

“I'm sure he can continue the royal authority of Mahameru and can make you happy Jean” King Paul said

“I think so dad” Queen Elisha Said

Jean looks so happy with that, she just smiles again.

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The atmosphere inside the kingdom Mahasurya was crowded at night, party party and party, which is what the Kingdom of Mahasurya does every night, for his victory against to the other kingdoms.

“let’s Party guys!! Hahahahaha” commander George speaks loudly

The voice is loud music, big smile of ladies call, it's so crowded.

Invisible King Albert and Queen Maya in the party.

In the holding room is so dark, there are two people who are familiar to the public Mahasurya

“if Luther Junior is here, this incident will not happen” Queen Maya Said

“I am sorry to have kicked him out of this kingdom” Albert Funderson replied.

“I also regret having followed all impolite remarks Commander; George” he said again

“Come on dad, hopefully we can get happiness later” Queen Maya said

It turns out, has 20 years of King Albert and Queen Maya in the living prisoners detained by the commander of George, who was a traitor to King Albert. Commander George wanted to rule the kingdom MahaSurya expelled by the royal successor Mahasurya; Lord Luther Junior, the son of King Albert.

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Outside the kingdom Mahasurya, combat troops of Mahameru were already preparing to attack the kingdom of Mahasurya, from both sea-General James luther was ready to strike, he was in aid by his friends, Wulfi; the smart monkey, Willy; the snack, Gufi; the elephant, Roumand; the Lion, Tee wee; the Crocodile. And from the ground commander of Nehru was ready to attack.

"Let's goooo. . . . " Commander Nehru said in a loud

Mahameru entered the royal army and attacked Mahasurya, no serious resistance, because almost all the troops of Mahasurya sound asleep after a party. Thousands of troops was defeated by the forces of war Mahameru. And General James luther king headed into the room, now occupied by Commander George. Inside the room there were six women and commander of George.

“whooo . . are you?” George speaks loudly and fearful

James Luther directly attacked the commander who now became king of Mahasurya

War could not be stopped, General James and Commandant George were still in war, war continues, and until in the top of Kingdom. And the commander of George fell into the ocean.

“argggggggggggggghhhh” Commander George shout

“blurrrrrr” Commander George fell into the sea

The body of George's gallant commander, a tough and strong is directly eaten by Tee wee, James luther’ Crocodile.

The battle has been won by troops war of Mahameru, some troops back to the Kingdom of Mahameru to report the results of the war.

King Albert and Queen Maya was saved, and he managed to find his son, who has pursued 20 years ago; Lord Luther Junior and his Wife, Sovia. And the kingdom Mahasurya in hand to his son Lord Luther Junior, to lead Mahasurya Kingdom. Meanwhile, the Kingdom Mahameru led by Prince James, who had married Jean Funderson, and they live happily in the Kingdom Mahameru.

Two kingdoms, in the west; Mahasurya, and on the east; Mahameru, unite and become a powerful kingdom, and the people in both west and east regions become peaceful, serene, safe for years with the leadership of the two kings who is the son and father, a strong, courageous, brave, strong, fair and care about the welfare of the people .